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Model EssayintermediateCEFR B2

Sports Professionals and High Salaries

Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss and give your opinion.

5 min read400 wordsEnhanced learning version

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introduction

As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and modern cars. I will discuss some viewpoints and explain my opinion. It is clear that sport is always a popular activity everywhere, and many people have already made it their profession.

Consequently, many teenagers start their careers in sport, and they continue working to achieve a better lifestyle and financial success. Of course, sportsmen spend a great deal of time and money pursuing their initial goals, and they work hard until they achieve top results. While other people are sleeping in their comfortable beds, sports professionals are exercising and working towards their main aims. Also, sportsmen and sportswomen do not strive only for their own sake; they can contribute to the reputation of their own country and nation. I think people should look at the background behind these achievements, because they can see the effort, difficult roads and many failures that these sports professionals have experienced.

On the other hand, some people think it is unfair that sports professionals earn so much money compared with doctors, politicians and builders. There is a big difference between sports professionals and doctors. For example, if someone who is famous for boxing or Taekwondo wins a world championship, the government may give him or her a new house, an expensive car or a large amount of money. In comparison, doctors treat serious illnesses and can save someone's life, but the government does not always pay enough attention to their contribution. That is why the situation seems unfair to some people.

Indeed, sports professionals are wealthier than writers and teachers in many cases. However, doing sport is beneficial mainly for a person's own health and future, while writers and teachers can bring more benefits to all members of society. Writers, for example, create novels that can improve people's outlook and broaden their understanding of the world.

conclusion

All in all, I think sports professionals are worthy of being rewarded alongside doctors and people in other professions. At the same time, people should respect and reward other workers, such as scientists, doctors and writers, because their work also makes important contributions to society.

Learn from the essay

Key language and writing lessons from this essay.

cohesion

Using linking expressions to connect ideas

Linking expressions help the reader understand how one idea relates to another. This essay uses expressions for cause and effect, contrast, examples, emphasis and conclusion.

Example: On the other hand, some people think it is unfair...
vocabulary

Using collocations naturally

Natural English often depends on combinations of words that commonly occur together. Expressions such as "earn a great deal of money" and "win a world championship" make the writing more natural.

Example: Sports professionals can earn a great deal of money.
writing

Presenting both sides of an argument

The essay presents the argument that high salaries are justified and then introduces the opposing view that other professions make important contributions to society.

Example: On the other hand, some people think it is unfair...
writing

Supporting an argument with examples

Specific examples can make a general argument clearer and more convincing to the reader.

Example: For example, if someone who is famous for boxing or Taekwondo wins a world championship...
sentence_structure

Using complex sentences

The essay uses clauses beginning with words such as while, because and although to connect related ideas within a sentence.

Example: While other people are sleeping in their comfortable beds, sports professionals are exercising and working towards their main aims.

Test Yourself

Check your understanding of the essay and its language.

Practice

Apply what you learned in your own writing.

1

Do you think successful sports professionals should earn more money than people in other important professions? Give reasons for your opinion.

opinion80–120 words
2

Write five sentences using collocations from this essay, such as "earn a great deal of money", "work hard", "achieve top results", "treat serious illnesses" and "bring more benefits to society".

vocabulary usage50–100 words
3

Write a short paragraph explaining why doctors, teachers or scientists make an important contribution to society. Use at least two linking expressions.

paragraph writing80–120 words

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